Checking both major characters, just for fun.

Scott: 10  Sumire: 10

>** APPEARANCE **

>Guy has small, skinny, undersized physique, +5

Sumire: 15

>Guy has realistic physique, +3

Scott: 13

>Guy has wings, +8

Scott: 21

>Guy has long fingers, +2

Scott: 23  Sumire: 17

>Guy is pretty enough to be mistaken for a girl, +4
> ...but still thinks he's ugly, -2 for annoyance

Scott: 25  Sumire: 21

>Guy has minor animalistic features (ears, fangs, tail, etc.), +2

Scott: 26  (only sometimes, so half points)

>Guy is under 20, +3
>Guy is under 14, -3

Hmm.  I'm not sure whether these are going by appearance or by actual
age.  Appearance would mean a +3 for Scott and -3 for Sumire, actual
would mean a 0 for Scott and +3 for Sumire.  I'll count actual.

>Guy's eye height is roughly level with...
> ...the average girl's face, +2

Scott: 28  (closer to the top of her head, actually, but not so tall
that he's actually looking -over- them)
Sumire: 26

>Guy undergoes physical transformation, +2
> ...which is even cuter than he is, +2
> ...and can't control it, -2

Scott: 29  (half penalty for partial control)
Sumire: 30 (nothing says "even cuter" has to be a *good* thing...)

>** INTELLIGENCE **
>
>Guy is dumber than a sack of hammers, -8
> ...but is still sweet, regain +4
> ...but not for lack of trying, regain +2

Sumire: 28

>Guy is moderately intelligent and knowledgeable, +4

Scott: 33

>Guy is artistic and/or creative, +4

Scott: 37  Sumire: 32

>Guy is a profound deep thinker/philosopher type, +4

Sumire: 36 (granted, it's a very strange philosophy)

>** ATTIRE AND FASHION **
>Guy dresses in a way that's practical but boring, +2

Scott: 39

>Guy wears a uniform, +6

Sumire: 42 (two of them, in fact...)

>Guy dresses as a girl, +4

Sumire: 46

>** PERSONALITY **
>
>Guy is not afraid to cry in front of others, +10

Scott: 49  Sumire: 56

>Guy is easy-going and agreeable, +6

Scott: 55

>Guy is sweet and emotional, +6

Sumire: 62

>Guy is calm, cool and collected, +4

Scott: 59

>Guy is arrogant or pompous, -6

Scott: 53

>Guy keeps his promises, +5
>     ... and threats, -2
>     ... even when they no longer matter, -3

Scott: 56  Sumire: 62

>Guy is kind and polite, +4
> ...even to people he doesn't like, further +2
> ...to the point of stupidity, -4

Scott: 60  Sumire: 64

>Guy dislikes fighting/killing, +4
> ...but will still stand up for himself, loved ones, or his beliefs, further
>+4

Sumire: 72

>** RESPONDS TO DANGER **
>
>By facing it honourably, +4

Sumire: 76

>By facing it using every dirty trick in the book, -2
> ...but still looks cool, +4

Scott: 62

>By protecting loved ones, +4
> ...even when they don't need it, -4
> ...and people he doesn't necesarily like, +4
>  ...but only because it's part of his job, -2

Scott: 64  Sumire: 78

>By running away or hiding, +2

Sumire: 80

>By making jokes, +2
> ...BAD jokes, -4

Scott: 62

>By making long-winded speeches, -4

Sumire: 76

>** ROMANCE **
>
>Guy is in love, +4
> ...with someone who doesn't love him, -6
>  ...but at least he realises they don't, +4
> ...but pretends he isn't, -7
>  ...because she's an ice-cold bitch, regain +4

Scott: 66 (although I'm not sure whether the "doesn't love him" and/or
"pretends he isn't" apply, given there are no clear indications either
way at the moment...)
Sumire: 78 (losing points for Tsubasa, how humiliating ^_-)

>Guy refuses to let his hormones think for him, +4
> ...but thinks too much, -2

Scott: 68

>Guy isn't afraid to show affection in public/in front of other guys, +4

Scott: 72  Sumire: 82

>Guy is chivalrous, +2

Scott: 74

>Guy is at the apex of a love triangle, +6

Scott: 80

>Guy doesn't discriminate between straight, gay and bi, +6

Sumire: 86

>Guy blushes and gets embarassed around his love interest(s), +4 kawaii
>bonus.

Sumire: 90

>Guy is rejected by his love interest and...
> ...is saddened, but gets over it, +4

Scott: 84

>Guy rejects somebody romantically interested in him by...
> ...dismissing it as a childish crush, -4
>  ...but it IS, regain +2

Scott: 82 (and preparing to dodge telekinetically-hurled objects. ;p)

>** GUY DIES **

>For love, +8
>Saving or avenging somebody, +4
>But gets better, -10

Scott: 84
No deaths yet for Sumire.

>** OTHER STUFF **
>
>Guy is gainfully employed, +6
> ...in a way that involves a uniform, +2
> ...in a way that involves leather, whips and chains, +6

Sumire: 98 (and if this had come a few months later, it'd be 104.
Mwahaha. :p)

>Guy can play a musical instrument/sing, +4

Scott: 88  Sumire: 102

>Guy writes his own songs, +4
> ...but they're awful, -4
> ...for other people, +2

Scott: 88  Sumire: 104

>Guy has martial arts, mecha piloting or other fighting skills, +4

Scott: 92  Sumire: 108

>Guy has magical/psionic powers, +4
> ...and looks really cool while casting, further +3

Scott: 96  Sumire: 115

>Guy carries a sword, +2
> ...and uses it well, +4

Scott: 102

>Guy watches soap operas, -4

Scott: 98  Sumire: 111

Scott:  Hey!  Shoujo anime shouldn't count!
RL-Scott:  Too bad.  It does.  Deal with it. :p

>Guy can cook, +4
> ...and wears an apron, +3

Scott: 102  Sumire: 118

>Guy has a cute pet, +4
> ...and openly shows affection for it, +2

Sumire: 124  (no, not Penny...)

>Guy is an angel, elf, vampire or other supernatural being, +4

Scott: 104 (half points again...)
Sumire: 128

>Guy is a GIRL, -10

Sumire: 118

Final scores: Scott 104, Sumire 118.  Which is extremely scary.  Now I
have to try not to think about that too much. ;p